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suggested corrections are in the windowTopic, Some people feel that money should not be spent on cultural amenities such as museums and theatre art festival. How important are these things to the society as a whole, are there any areas which are more important for the government to fund. Nowadays, many people feel that government should not include tourist centers into the budget. However art is highly germane the world at large, as it is believed that human beings are drawn to art and culture inform of communication and expression. This essay will enumerate the necessity of art in the society with examples,as well as other area that government need to focus on. Overtime attention of many people have been shifted from art and culture due to increase in the rate of civilization and socialization, nevertheless art is highly crucial to people and it is important can not be overemphasize. Firstly history are pass from one generation to another through the help of art and culture, for instance art work are designed inform of sculpture to express how Battle were worn, with the various types of weapon used to conquer the opposite party. This has helped in maintaining historical context. Also art festival has boosted many nation’s economy across the globe through the aid of creations of job opportunities which inturn generate high revenue to the country.
Secondly there are other areas were government fund can be redirected to as there importance outweigh art and culture, for example building of hospital s and employing professional in the area of health sector will reduce fatality and mortality rate in the society. In addition infrastructure are also highly importance’s, for example constructions of roads and bridges will reduce traffic jams on the road. This will also reduce stress on one’s health. In conclusion art and culture need to be funded as studies has human being express themselves through this means, other areas also can not be overlook so as to leave a healthy life style.
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